final text elements inserted after Brams suggestions
Dear all
please see attached the final text elements I now would insert into the report in accordance with suggestions made by Bram:
1. the repsonse from Rijk: as suggested
2. the footnote on KWS: I had to change the wording from Bram. KWS does not comment on the decision of the AC (2017) but on the Technical Board. Nevertheless, an interesting statement.
3. the co-inventor with KWS: I looked in all examples again, this seems to be the only missing co-inventor.
In addition, Johanna made some suggestions for details in editing. I all will now forward to layout.
Erling can you please insert the new passages as attached into the Danish version? After that please send the final Danish version and I will try to organise the layout. Thanks a lot!!
Cheers
Christoph
Dear Christoph and thanks to Bram too for great Work. I will make sure, the changes will be in the Danish version and as soon as the final version is ready - I will read it through once again to make sure everything is correct. Most of the quotations I have written in English as a copy. With my Danish translation underneath to avoid misunderstandings if.... Cheers Erling
Den lør. 18. apr. 2020 kl. 11.53 skrev Christoph Then < info@no-patents-on-seeds.org>:
Dear all
please see attached the final text elements I now would insert into the report in accordance with suggestions made by Bram:
the repsonse from Rijk: as suggested
the footnote on KWS: I had to change the wording from Bram. KWS does
not comment on the decision of the AC (2017) but on the Technical Board. Nevertheless, an interesting statement.
- the co-inventor with KWS: I looked in all examples again, this seems
to be the only missing co-inventor.
In addition, Johanna made some suggestions for details in editing. I all will now forward to layout.
Erling can you please insert the new passages as attached into the Danish version? After that please send the final Danish version and I will try to organise the layout. Thanks a lot!!
Cheers
Christoph
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Dear Christoph,
attached some minor corrections in the text.
Is there still the possibility to improve the front page? Below my comment from 14 April:
"My suggestions would f.e. be to eliminate the white background as much as possible (except maybe for the logo) and to put the visuals in straight lines next to each other covering the whole top part of the front page (and have our logo on top). We could just use 10 visuals instead of 11 - or maybe put 1 visuals next to the logo as it is right now."
Best, Johanna
Johanna ECKHARDT Project Coordination Tel. +43 680 21 26 343 johanna.eckhardt@no-patents-on-seeds.org
NO PATENTS ON SEEDS! www.no-patents-on-seeds.org www.facebook.com/nopatentsonseeds www.twitter.com/nopatentsonseed
-----Ursprüngliche Nachricht----- Von: Npos_2018 [mailto:npos_2018-bounces@testbiotech.de] Im Auftrag von Christoph Then Gesendet: Samstag, 18. April 2020 11:54 An: npos_2018@testbiotech.de Betreff: [Npos_2018] final text elements inserted after Brams suggestions
Dear all
please see attached the final text elements I now would insert into the report in accordance with suggestions made by Bram:
1. the repsonse from Rijk: as suggested
2. the footnote on KWS: I had to change the wording from Bram. KWS does not comment on the decision of the AC (2017) but on the Technical Board. Nevertheless, an interesting statement.
3. the co-inventor with KWS: I looked in all examples again, this seems to be the only missing co-inventor.
In addition, Johanna made some suggestions for details in editing. I all will now forward to layout.
Erling can you please insert the new passages as attached into the Danish version? After that please send the final Danish version and I will try to organise the layout. Thanks a lot!!
Cheers
Christoph
Dear Johanna,
I would keep the front page as it is.
11 reasons require 11 pictures.
white background is partially necessary (because of the many colors in the pictures) and - if I got it right - was expiclitely demanded by Savia for their logo.
you always seem to like straight lines - but I would prefer more dynamic version. I already discussed this with Claudia. I hope we can leave it as it is.
thanks for your flexibility
Christoph
Am 20.04.20 um 11:49 schrieb Johanna Eckhardt no-patents-seeds.org:
Dear Christoph,
attached some minor corrections in the text.
Is there still the possibility to improve the front page? Below my comment from 14 April:
"My suggestions would f.e. be to eliminate the white background as much as possible (except maybe for the logo) and to put the visuals in straight lines next to each other covering the whole top part of the front page (and have our logo on top). We could just use 10 visuals instead of 11 - or maybe put 1 visuals next to the logo as it is right now."
Best, Johanna
Johanna ECKHARDT Project Coordination Tel. +43 680 21 26 343 johanna.eckhardt@no-patents-on-seeds.org
NO PATENTS ON SEEDS! www.no-patents-on-seeds.org www.facebook.com/nopatentsonseeds www.twitter.com/nopatentsonseed
-----Ursprüngliche Nachricht----- Von: Npos_2018 [mailto:npos_2018-bounces@testbiotech.de] Im Auftrag von Christoph Then Gesendet: Samstag, 18. April 2020 11:54 An: npos_2018@testbiotech.de Betreff: [Npos_2018] final text elements inserted after Brams suggestions
Dear all
please see attached the final text elements I now would insert into the report in accordance with suggestions made by Bram:
the repsonse from Rijk: as suggested
the footnote on KWS: I had to change the wording from Bram. KWS does not comment on the decision of the AC (2017) but on the Technical Board.
Nevertheless, an interesting statement.
- the co-inventor with KWS: I looked in all examples again, this seems to be the only missing co-inventor.
In addition, Johanna made some suggestions for details in editing. I all will now forward to layout.
Erling can you please insert the new passages as attached into the Danish version? After that please send the final Danish version and I will try to organise the layout. Thanks a lot!!
Cheers
Christoph
Dear Christoph,
sure, these were my suggestions, but the decision is up to you.
Best, Johanna
Johanna ECKHARDT Project Coordination Tel. +43 680 21 26 343 johanna.eckhardt@no-patents-on-seeds.org
NO PATENTS ON SEEDS! www.no-patents-on-seeds.org www.facebook.com/nopatentsonseeds www.twitter.com/nopatentsonseed
-----Ursprüngliche Nachricht----- Von: Npos_2018 [mailto:npos_2018-bounces@testbiotech.de] Im Auftrag von Christoph Then Gesendet: Dienstag, 21. April 2020 08:47 An: npos_2018@testbiotech.de Betreff: Re: [Npos_2018] final text elements inserted after Brams suggestions
Dear Johanna,
I would keep the front page as it is.
11 reasons require 11 pictures.
white background is partially necessary (because of the many colors in the pictures) and - if I got it right - was expiclitely demanded by Savia for their logo.
you always seem to like straight lines - but I would prefer more dynamic version. I already discussed this with Claudia. I hope we can leave it as it is.
thanks for your flexibility
Christoph
Am 20.04.20 um 11:49 schrieb Johanna Eckhardt no-patents-seeds.org:
Dear Christoph,
attached some minor corrections in the text.
Is there still the possibility to improve the front page? Below my comment from 14 April:
"My suggestions would f.e. be to eliminate the white background as much as possible (except maybe for the logo) and to put the visuals in straight lines next to each other covering the whole top part of the front page (and have our logo on top). We could just use 10 visuals instead of 11 - or maybe put 1 visuals next to the logo as it is right now."
Best, Johanna
Johanna ECKHARDT Project Coordination Tel. +43 680 21 26 343 johanna.eckhardt@no-patents-on-seeds.org
NO PATENTS ON SEEDS! www.no-patents-on-seeds.org www.facebook.com/nopatentsonseeds www.twitter.com/nopatentsonseed
-----Ursprüngliche Nachricht----- Von: Npos_2018 [mailto:npos_2018-bounces@testbiotech.de] Im Auftrag von Christoph Then Gesendet: Samstag, 18. April 2020 11:54 An: npos_2018@testbiotech.de Betreff: [Npos_2018] final text elements inserted after Brams suggestions
Dear all
please see attached the final text elements I now would insert into the report in accordance with suggestions made by Bram:
the repsonse from Rijk: as suggested
the footnote on KWS: I had to change the wording from Bram. KWS does not comment on the decision of the AC (2017) but on the Technical Board.
Nevertheless, an interesting statement.
- the co-inventor with KWS: I looked in all examples again, this seems to be the only missing co-inventor.
In addition, Johanna made some suggestions for details in editing. I all will now forward to layout.
Erling can you please insert the new passages as attached into the Danish version? After that please send the final Danish version and I will try to organise the layout. Thanks a lot!!
Cheers
Christoph
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