Dear all, dear Chrisoph,
I understand very well why the quote fits oxfam better. I didn't want to push my way in, just offer. In any case, I am very happy with the quote from Erling!
Thanks johanna for the good pictures!
all the best Judith
Zitat von Christoph Then info@no-patents-on-seeds.org:
Dear all
please see attached the German version revised with track changes. Most of them are triggered from comments made by Dagmar.
I did not follow these suggestions in these details: I would not delete the CRISPR-issue (but it is shortened), I think this most relevant issue to mobilise political support and it is also nicely framed by the quote of Oxfam. Since Simon (SWISSAID) is away, I would propose to leave this topic to Oxfam in both languages (or in German to PublicEye, if interested).
I also would not introduce some further explanations (as proposed by Dagmar), I think it is better reading in this version.
I propose to give the first quote to Judith and wait for Erling to respond on the English version of the quote.
The English version to follow soon, but I wanted to let you know the current stage of the work.
Cheers
Christoph