Dear all,
thanks for all the good work! Looking forward to building more pressure on Carlsberg.. ;)
Attached some minor further suggestions for the text.
Best, Magdalena
-----Ursprüngliche Nachricht----- Von: Npos_2018 [mailto:npos_2018-bounces@testbiotech.de] Im Auftrag von Christoph Then Gesendet: Dienstag, 2. November 2021 16:10 An: npos_2018@testbiotech.de Betreff: [Npos_2018] draft media release German version revised, heading for Thursday
Dear all
please see attached the German version revised with track changes. Most of them are triggered from comments made by Dagmar.
I did not follow these suggestions in these details: I would not delete the CRISPR-issue (but it is shortened), I think this most relevant issue to mobilise political support and it is also nicely framed by the quote of Oxfam. Since Simon (SWISSAID) is away, I would propose to leave this topic to Oxfam in both languages (or in German to PublicEye, if interested).
I also would not introduce some further explanations (as proposed by Dagmar), I think it is better reading in this version.
I propose to give the first quote to Judith and wait for Erling to respond on the English version of the quote.
The English version to follow soon, but I wanted to let you know the current stage of the work.
Cheers
Christoph