some edits on our media release for next week (de and en)
Dear all
the English native speaker and Axel already sent their comments.
please see amended versions. We are still looking for somebody to take the second quote.
cheers
Christoph
Hello all,
Thank for the great work!
I find the second quote a bit too strong in terms of suggesting they are doing illegal stuff ;) and Katherine had this great suggestion of writing " "The EPO should act in the public interest and honour the intention of EU patent law".
If it goes it this direction no one has taken it already, I could take it.
Also, in the EN version only, one or several words seem to be wrong/missing in the last para (DE is fine).
No Patents on Seeds! believes this could be a model law for national patent legislation in other countries. And as guidance for the clarification the should be brought forward by the Administrative Council. (maybe “And also act as a guidance for the clarifying decisions expected to be taken/brought forward be the Administrative Council”?)
Keine Patente auf Saatgut! sieht in diesem Gesetz eine Vorlage für andere nationale Patentgesetze und für die erwarteten Entscheidungen des Verwaltungsrats.
Best,
Dagmar
-----Ursprüngliche Nachricht----- Von: Npos_2018 npos_2018-bounces@testbiotech.de Im Auftrag von Christoph Then Gesendet: Sonntag, 25. Juni 2023 16:29 An: npos_2018@testbiotech.de Betreff: [Npos_2018] some edits on our media release for next week (de and en)
Dear all
the English native speaker and Axel already sent their comments.
please see amended versions. We are still looking for somebody to take
the second quote.
cheers
Christoph
ok, we change accordingly.
Am 26.06.23 um 07:53 schrieb ARCHE NOAH Dagmar Urban:
Hello all,
Thank for the great work!
I find the second quote a bit too strong in terms of suggesting they are doing illegal stuff ;) and Katherine had this great suggestion of writing " "The EPO should act in the public interest and honour the intention of EU patent law".
If it goes it this direction no one has taken it already, I could take it.
Also, in the EN version only, one or several words seem to be wrong/missing in the last para (DE is fine).
/No Patents on Seeds!/believes this could be a model law for national patent legislation in other countries. And as guidance for the clarification the should be brought forward by the Administrative Council. (maybe “And also act as a guidance for the clarifying decisions expected to be taken/brought forward be the Administrative Council”?)
/Keine Patente auf Saatgut!/ sieht in diesem Gesetz eine Vorlage für andere nationale Patentgesetze und für die erwarteten Entscheidungen des Verwaltungsrats.
Best,
Dagmar
-----Ursprüngliche Nachricht----- Von: Npos_2018 npos_2018-bounces@testbiotech.de Im Auftrag von Christoph Then Gesendet: Sonntag, 25. Juni 2023 16:29 An: npos_2018@testbiotech.de Betreff: [Npos_2018] some edits on our media release for next week (de and en)
Dear all
the English native speaker and Axel already sent their comments.
please see amended versions. We are still looking for somebody to take
the second quote.
cheers
Christoph
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