draft media release revised in German and English
I added some ideas from Dagmar, however I would include the screaming vegetables, this might undermine the serious message ... maybe you find a good solution, I tried, but I could not.
I will send this to English editing: I made some suggestions who might take a quote. Please confirm or reject.
cheers
Christoph
Hi together,
I would like to propose to formulate the 4th paragraph activly: -> NPOS publishes and hands over the report.
In the German version it seems to be necessary to clarify the "gelten" in the 1st para: "Das Patentamt lässt auch zufällige genetische Variationen, wie sie beispielsweise durch Sonnenlichtstrahlung ausgelöst werden, mittlerweile als technische Erfindungen gelten." Es gilt bestimmt nicht allgemein, im Bewusstsein aller Menschen, aber eben in der Praxis des Patentamtes. In the English version you talk of "can be claimed as ‘technical inventions’".
Last para: nicht "Tomaten" sondern -> "Tomatensorten" gilt es zu züchten. Some other minor changes proposes in the German version.
best Andreas
Am 24.06.2022 17:51, schrieb Christoph Then:
I added some ideas from Dagmar, however I would include the screaming vegetables, this might undermine the serious message ... maybe you find a good solution, I tried, but I could not.
I will send this to English editing: I made some suggestions who might take a quote. Please confirm or reject.
cheers
Christoph
Npos_2018 mailing list Npos_2018@testbiotech.de https://lists.testbiotech.de/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/npos_2018
thanks a lot - all fine with me. I wait for English edits and resend final versions.
Am 24.06.22 um 20:58 schrieb a.riekeberg@jpberlin.de:
Hi together,
I would like to propose to formulate the 4th paragraph activly: -> NPOS publishes and hands over the report.
In the German version it seems to be necessary to clarify the "gelten" in the 1st para: "Das Patentamt lässt auch zufällige genetische Variationen, wie sie beispielsweise durch Sonnenlichtstrahlung ausgelöst werden, mittlerweile als technische Erfindungen gelten." Es gilt bestimmt nicht allgemein, im Bewusstsein aller Menschen, aber eben in der Praxis des Patentamtes. In the English version you talk of "can be claimed as ‘technical inventions’".
Last para: nicht "Tomaten" sondern -> "Tomatensorten" gilt es zu züchten. Some other minor changes proposes in the German version.
best Andreas
Am 24.06.2022 17:51, schrieb Christoph Then:
I added some ideas from Dagmar, however I would include the screaming vegetables, this might undermine the serious message ... maybe you find a good solution, I tried, but I could not.
I will send this to English editing: I made some suggestions who might take a quote. Please confirm or reject.
cheers
Christoph
Npos_2018 mailing list Npos_2018@testbiotech.de https://lists.testbiotech.de/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/npos_2018
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