Dear all,

thank you. The report and the layout look very good. Great that the table of content contains hyperlinks as well. But quite frankly I am not a big fan of the front page. My suggestions would f.e. be to eliminate the white background as much as possible (except maybe for the logo) and to put the visuals in straight lines next to each other covering the whole top part of the front page (and have our logo on top). We could just use 10 visuals instead of 11 - or maybe put 1 visuals next to the logo as it is right now.

And a general question: are we not gendering in our (German) texts or at least have a short note somewhere?

The logos on p.1/2 are in bad quality. I already asked Martha if she has a better logo from BUND. Christoph, could you contact Salvia? I'll check for the logos from our partner organisations.

Since we might change the text now in regard to the feedback from the companies, I will not yet make a final proof read.

Best, Johanna

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-----Ursprüngliche Nachricht----- Von: Npos_2018 [mailto:npos_2018-bounces@testbiotech.de] Im Auftrag von Christoph Then Gesendet: Dienstag, 14. April 2020 08:08 An: npos_2018@testbiotech.de Betreff: [Npos_2018] full German version of the report (see front page and logos)

Dear all

please see with front page and logos the full German version.

we are still working with links to glossar, I guess we will limit it to link each just one time, not through the whole text.

cheers

Christoph