Hello,
About the Draft onĀ Barley and Beer, the Patent EP 1346030 is also lapsed in lots (or all?) of countries for non payement.
see https://register.epo.org/application?number=EP01902597&lng=en&tab=federated
the Patent EP2373154 has still an opposition pending in Finland
I already put this information in the document as "Comments", feel free to delete it, if needed.
I added also Ruth's corrections directly in the document.
New version is attached.
have a nice day.
AC